ClosetCoon


 * **Original review author:** || Long Tom ||
 * **Webcomic name:** || ClosetCoon ||
 * **Author:** || LeafDog (originally going by the name of Jeff-kun) ||
 * **Start Date** || August 14, 2002 ||
 * **End Date** || Not updated since April 23, 2011 ||
 * **Genre** || Adult furry comedy, full nudity including genitals ||
 * **Defining Flaw** || Contrived storyline, characters whose only development involves their becoming gay, gratituous nudity and genital shots, homosexuals suffer no ostracism, harrassment, or other fallout-which is not the case with them in real life. ||

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 * Art: || image http://badwebcomics.wdfiles.com/local--files/start/bww-seal%281%29.png image http://badwebcomics.wdfiles.com/local--files/start/bww-seal%281%29.png Passable if not particularly great. ||
 * Storyline: || image http://badwebcomics.wdfiles.com/local--files/start/bww-seal%281%29.png Starts off with an intriguing premise about a raccoon college student slowly discovering his homosexual proclivities and his attraction to a male fox friend of his. But as the story goes on, it abandons credibility for wish-fulfillment fantasy. ||
 * Characters: || image http://badwebcomics.wdfiles.com/local--files/start/bww-seal%281%29.png image http://badwebcomics.wdfiles.com/local--files/start/bww-seal%281%29.png The characters are described in the cast page but are hardly developed in the story itself. ||
 * Miscellaneous Details: || image http://badwebcomics.wdfiles.com/local--files/start/bww-seal%281%29.png The title character is referred to as a "coon" in the story, which happens to also be a derisive name for African-Americans.  Presumably he isn't supposed to represent an African-American, but all the same the term is simply inappropriate. ||
 * Overall: || image http://badwebcomics.wdfiles.com/local--files/start/bww-seal%281%29.png This could have been a good comic about homosexuality, but it jumps the shark almost immediately and turns into wish-fulfillment soft-core porn. ||

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++ Background

I saw it mentioned in the forum of another webcomic, and it looked intriguing. Not being gay myself, I wanted an inside look at the gay world.

++ Downfall

As mentioned above, the initially closeted and uncertain Aiden Harris all too quickly changes course and fully accepts his homosexual feelings, and from then on the story collapses into wish-fulfillment.

++ Story and Plot

Aiden Harris is a raccoon attending college who, in a locker room, sees a naked male fox and gets weird feelings. Sitting behind the same fox in class, Aiden gets that feeling again and acts accordingly.  But his activities don't stop there.  Finally his actions get noticed, but Aiden denies them.  Even so, Aiden has drawn suspicion.  And one person, a known homosexual, isn't merely suspicious anymore.

But Aiden doesn't stay in the closet for long, and he confesses his feelings to Rodney, who advises him to do this. Not exactly unexpectedly, Aiden reports that Colin reacted unhappily.  (Side note: in the last panel, Rodney thinks of getting Aiden for himself.  So what does that mean for his tiger boyfriend?)  Then Colin hears from Rodney,  and he agrees to reconcile with Aiden for the moment.

Ironically, there are two strips added between strip numbers 28 and 29 years after the fact which makes one wonder if they are fill-ins to the main story, or a possible alternative scenario, e.g. "Colin isn't gay after all, look elsewhere for a boyfriend Aiden". It could be interpreted either way.

Learning of what happened, Rick decides to set Colin up with his sister. And things work out happily for Colin, but alas, not so well for Aiden.  Oh, but maybe Colin isn't so straight?  Perhaps not.

But now someone else has an eye upon Aiden. And it turns out that yes, Colin is definitely gay after all.  So now we have a love triangle.  But no matter, Aiden chooses Colin, who had first triggered his homosexual feelings. Tough luck, Duma.

This is the main storyline; other aspects of the strip will be covered later. As I mentioned, the whole story has turned into wish fulfillment with everything working out too well. Aiden is initially discomfited about his newfound homosexuality, but he owns up to it almost immediately-and everything is fine for him. Aiden suffers no harrassment or ostracism. No mention is made of his family or how they might react, nor does the story mention Aiden's past. Did he ever have any homosexual feelings before he saw Colin? He's 19 years old and a college student, and he certainly must have seen other nude males in his life. But the strip never brings that up. Even worse is that Colin abruptly develops previously unknown homosexual proclivities after Aiden kisses him, so all too conveniently, Aiden gets the gay lover he wanted. This would be a lot more credible is there were any signs of Colin's having homosexual inclinations even before Aiden had ever lay eyes upon him. But no backgrounds are given either for Aiden or Colin. At least one is provided for Duma-he came from Africa and was aware of his homosexuality long beforehand.

++ Art review

Line drawings with some crosshatching. Unfortunately the art quality actually declines as the comic continues, as if the author has lost interest in doing this strip.

=image http://i.imgur.com/DMniM.jpg = The art from the original strip of 2002

=image http://i.imgur.com/NnFP7.jpg = The art from 2011, stiffer and without the shading of before

++ Writing review

There is the main storyline and comic interludes with characters known as the Cocos (covered later). As for the main storyline, it does have some mild humor such as Duma chasing a gazelle for lust rather than food, as well as the irony of Aiden getting his towel stolen by Duma long after Aiden had stolen Colin's towel. Unfortunately, there are also strips like this that may have been intended to be funny but come across as disgusting instead. And then we find yet another character discovering his homosexuality. This whole concept has been repeated once too often.


 * The Cocos**

=image http://i.imgur.com/Ff4UE.jpg

These are strips inserted at intervals into the main strip, and feature versions of the storyline characters done up as pieces of fruit with faces, ears, stick limbs, and tails. Examples: Aidecoco, Colicoco, and Dumaorange. These strips parody the main strips, with jokes like this, this, and my favorite.

++ Author biography

This was all I found on him.

++ Conclusion

This could've been a contender. At the beginning, the title character was just discovering his homosexual proclivities and was confused about them, and in fact denied them. But all of a sudden Aiden Harris simply accepts and admits his homosexuality, and he suffers no consequences. Even worse, other people suddenly turn out to be gay, and everything is fine and dandy for them, except for one taunting comic by Rick. As mentioned earlier, there's no mention of anybody's families or non-homosexual friends or how they might react. (In real life, even supposedly liberal-minded people are not always accepting of homosexuality, especially when it's their own relatives.)

This is an adult comic, and the author gives us plenty of warning about it. Thus, it should hardly be shocking that it includes male nudity. However:

=image http://i.imgur.com/mizyt.jpg = In this case, the male nudity is arguably justifiable because the sight of it makes Aiden start to wonder about his sexuality, which is what the comic is about.

=image http://i.imgur.com/HhNG1.jpg = But it's not really necessary to "show it all" here.

=image http://i.imgur.com/IRvJQ.jpg = And really, do we need to see popping penises?

=image http://i.imgur.com/v3XYn.jpg = Yet after all that, the author anticlimactically eschews showing actual sexual activity.

++ Links

LeafDog's VCL account LeafDog's Furaffinity account LeafDog's Yahoo fan group