The End Of Things


 * **Original review author:** || Long Tom ||
 * **Webcomic name:** || The End Of Things ||
 * **Author:** || Believe it or not, the author never identifies himself, though I'm sure that he is male. ||
 * **Start Date** || April 19, 2004 ||
 * **End Date** || March 10, 2012 (The author claims the comic will continue) ||
 * **Genre** || Furry, Slice-Of-Life ||
 * **Defining Flaw** || Not funny enough for comedy yet too silly and random for a narrative. ||

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 * Art: || image http://badwebcomics.wdfiles.com/local--files/start/bww-seal%281%29.png image http://badwebcomics.wdfiles.com/local--files/start/bww-seal%281%29.png image http://badwebcomics.wdfiles.com/local--files/start/bww-seal%281%29.png The art is the best part of the webcomic. ||
 * Storyline: || image http://badwebcomics.wdfiles.com/local--files/start/bww-seal%281%29.png image http://badwebcomics.wdfiles.com/local--files/start/bww-seal%281%29.png Furries in their (presumably) final year of college. ||
 * Characters: || image http://badwebcomics.wdfiles.com/local--files/start/bww-seal%281%29.png image http://badwebcomics.wdfiles.com/local--files/start/bww-seal%281%29.png Relatively realistic; but the occasional screwball actions throw a kibosh on their credibility. ||
 * Miscellaneous Details: || image http://badwebcomics.wdfiles.com/local--files/start/bww-seal%281%29.png image http://badwebcomics.wdfiles.com/local--files/start/bww-seal%281%29.png The webcomic's title may suggest that it has an apocalyptic theme; but it is merely a furry slice-of-life story. ||
 * Overall: || image http://badwebcomics.wdfiles.com/local--files/start/bww-seal%281%29.png image http://badwebcomics.wdfiles.com/local--files/start/bww-seal%281%29.png A story can be both a comedy and a narrative. In the case of //The End Of Things//, though, it doesn't work as either.  The silly parts described below make the story impossible to really take seriously, yet there is too little humor to qualify as a comedy. ||

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++ Background

The title of the webcomic might give the impression that this is an apocalyptic story, but it is not. It's simply a slice-of-life comic about furry college undergraduates. As the author himself says:

"The End of Things is a story about a boy named Evan Li and his friends in their last year at Rosander University. All they have is each other, but various personal issues and their rapidly approaching passage into adulthood and the real world will test how strong or weak their relationship really is.

The comic began as a gag strip that ran in the school newspaper back in college. When school ended, one of my friends suggested putting it on the web. I decided that it should follow more of a narrative instead of just being gags each time.

If you look through the archives, you can see how the comic has evolved. I’m still continually learning and I like to keep everything organic, so you’ll notice that the art changes as it goes on."

++ Downfall

It never gets off the ground to begin with.

++ Story and Plot

There are five storylines (not including gag strips and fan art):


 * "A Foolish Maneuver":** The first strip, perhaps appropriately, is about...smelly underwear. (The roommates Evan and Ryan share underwear?!?  I didn't think even gay couples did that.)  But never mind that, they plan to visit a bar, joining some friends there.  But at the bar, Evan is left alone and is met by a cheetah girl, and they talk, though the meeting ends unhappily.  Evan does not enjoy the bar, but Teri and Ashley do.  Evan confesses to Ryan his lack of romantic interests, with a possible exception, but then everyone leaves, and Evan and Ryan encounter Maynard, their fellow-roommate, who was trying to enjoy a campus play, except some audience members were talking loudly.  (Evidently nobody simply thought to ask these people to leave.)


 * "In The Meantime":** Simply four random jokes.


 * "The Soap Incident":** Evan tries to borrow Ryan's soap, but Ryan refuses because it has a story behind it. In his college freshman year, Ryan goes to bathe in the men's washroom, only to encounter a Peeping Tom...or rather, a drunken classmate who forces his way inside the building.  (Huh?  I've been in various college dormitories and none of them had washroom windows you could see through, let alone those which could be opened from the outside.  Where did the author go to school?)  Anyhow, the drunk gets belligerent, and Ryan flees the washroom, only to find his dorm room door locked.  So when the drunk catches up, Ryan, disregarding his own personal safety, gets in a fight with the drunk rather than let him go with the soap.  Afterward, Ryan makes a major discovery about himself.  Roommate Matt had earlier left the room, but upon returning takes care of the drunk, who then flees.  The story does, however, have a rewarding ending.  (Evidently nobody else in the dorm overheard anything, and nobody thought to simply call campus security when someone broke into the dorm.)


 * "The 'Ass' In Assassin":** Maynard and other members of the theater department have set up an "assassination" game among themselves...but it seems to have gotten to the participants' heads. Whoops, scratch the "seems to".  Maynard goes out to continue his hunt while Evan goes to bed, only to have his beauty sleep ruined by a phone call.  Thus, Evan decides to go and find Ryan, but en route runs into Ashley, and they briefly converse and part.  Teri encounters Ryan, and they have a meeting before they find Evan, who informs them that Maynard is in the library.

Meanwhile, hunting in the library, Maynard literally runs into his intended victim. After a bit of chase, Maynard manages to shoot his target, but it doesn't count due to a technicality. No matter, the hunt continues. And it starts going to an extreme. Maynard tries to call everything off, but his target has a one-track mind. Luckily, Maynard is able to bring the game to a conclusion. With that, Maynard and his roommates have a celebration. (Okay, the comic itself is getting ridiculous. A library table gets smashed in front of witnesses, someone nearly gets killed over a stupid water gun game...and nobody gets into trouble?  They're not even called to the dean's office?  Is this story supposed to be realistic, or silly entertainment?)


 * Guest Art:** Five strips by other artists.


 * "Pseudo-Serenity":** The story involves Ryan making a phone call to Teri. In the midst of it, he has a brief conversation with Evan on the fact that the latter might be anorexic.  Then Ryan talks with Teri about their mutual problems in art class.  Including being very behind on schoolwork.  (Is Ryan supposed to be based on Bluto Blutarski?)  After a sharp admonishment by Teri, the conversation ends.  Teri then talks with Ashley, who explains why she calls Evan "Fig", and the story arc ends suggesting possible future trouble, as well as noting that roommates Teri and Ashley don't live in a dorm.


 * "Severed Ties":** The longest story arc which begins by Maynard and Ryan admonishing Evan for not eating enough. Then the trio finds someone who hasn't parked their car correctly, and Evan sends the person a message.  Evan dismisses his roommates' concerns about his possible anorexia, but then he goes on a run the next morning, which turns out poorly.  And other people besides Evan's roommates are noticing his thinness-including Evan's class professor.  But even then, Evan refuses to seek medical attention, so Ryan decides to get Evan's family involved.  Soon after, Evan finally contacts the high school friend who had tried to get through to him before.  Ashley also steps in, and has a different way of dealing with Evan's problems.  Finally she tells Evan how much he had changed over the past two years, and afterward there is a flashback sequence about Ashley becoming an art major.  Then we're back to the present.

Meanwhile, Ryan finds his art project from before, and decides to make a few changes. Soon afterwards, life imitates art...or not. Now we suddenly learn that Evan has asthma? (Rather suspiciously seems to be a "made up as he went along" plot element.) But now, Evan has a new obligation. So one swordfight with Maynard later, Ted, the high school friend mentioned earlier, has arrived to pick up Evan. While Evan gets ready to go, Ted tells Maynard about how Evan used to be chubby, and acted to lose weight, but then got the notion that Evan was going too far with the idea. Finally Ted takes Evan home.

But whither Ryan? Oh. Anyway, Ryan admits to Teri that he had been wrong to change his painting the way he did because he had been mad at Evan. Teri, however, does agree with Evan on one issue. Question is, is there a real romance between Ryan and Teri?

Meanwhile, as Ted is taking Evan home, they converse about various topics.

Ryan is now the attendant at a student art gallery, and he and fellow student Isherwood have a brief discussion about art.

Evan and Ted stop to eat at a "Ruby Doomsday" restaurant (hilarious), and their discussion continues. (And character J. T. Tigerclaw from another webcomic makes an appearance as the server. Presumably why the author has chosen to use furries for this webcomic-and as is later seen, the author goes to furry conventions.)  Anyway, Evan has a glass of beer at Ted's urging...but it leads to an embarrassing disaster.

(Unfortunately. just when you thought the author had abandoned the ridiculous plotlines of before...the whole webcomic jumps the shark. Even the craziest drunk wouldn't suddenly try to take off anybody's clothes in public.  This might be acceptable for a screwball comedy, but since the rest of the comic is not supposed to be a screwball comedy, it just throws everything off kilter and makes the webcomic impossible to take seriously anymore.)

Anyway, Evan tells Ted about his last encounter with Cynthia. First, they have a bit of conversation, and then...whoa! (Um, first the story hints that Evan might be homosexual, and yet he has great physical lust for a female? And by the way, what about contraception, pregnancy, etc.?)  But never mind, at least Evan still feels guilty about the whole thing.

Then Evan is finally dropped off at his house. Hello, Dad, hello, Mom, hello, Sis. And then comes the long-awaited blood test. After that comes parental regrets over Evan's choice of college major. And after that, Evan decides to meet up with his high school buddies. However, it seems that they haven't exactly aged well. Then the reunion starts going downhill, and is cut short. Evan admits to his sister afterward how he had been disillusioned with his old friends.

So how are Maynard and Ryan doing? Well, Ryan has taken a course which requires a really weird assignment. (When I went to college, there was such an establishment in town...and visitors were charged a fifty cents browsing fee to look around...and the store proprietor didn't talk like that to his customers. I could never imagine a college course of any sort that would require one to patronize such a place, so either this is an example of craziness, or college has changed a lot since the days I attended.)  It also turns out that Ryan's old roommate has just patronized that establishment...though for different reasons. Meanwhile, Maynard learns by chance who owned the car that Evan had earlier wrote upon...the same man who had broken into the dorm during "The Soap Incident". (Small world.) Ryan also encounters him. Will Ryan's prediction about him prove to be true?

Evan arrives back at college. (We never find out the results of his blood test.) Maynard greets him with a suitable present. And the story ends on this note.

++ Art review

=image http://i1280.photobucket.com/albums/a492/Thomas_Radigan/2004-04-23_zps8e02c51c.gif = Artwork from a 2004 strip

=image http://i1280.photobucket.com/albums/a492/Thomas_Radigan/2010-06-16_zpsdfd55447.gif = Artwork from the 2010 strip (amazingly, only one strip was drawn in 2010)

Originally crude and scribbly line art, but over time it slowly but surely gets much better.

The later art is line art with high black and white contrast, with minimal grays, and lacking in shadows and shading, which has the unfortunate effect of making the pictures flat-looking. To the author's credit, however, proportions of the characters are realistic and consistent, and the "animal" faces are reasonably realistic. It is refreshing to see a furry comic that doesn't resort to animu or silly exaggeration.

The backgrounds are good, too, not over cluttered or underdone, and perspective and proportion are consistent there. Sadly, no shading on those either.

++ Writing review

//The End Of Things// tries to cover several genres, but never really fits into any one of them. On the one hand, it tries to be a mild comedy, on the other hand, it tries to be a screwball comedy, and on the third hand it tries to be a narrative. Okay, this is a funny animal comic, so it cannot be expected to be completely realistic. But we should be able to have some idea what to expect-and instead, the author seems to be making up random up things as he goes along, (e. g. Evan's having asthma and needing an inhaler, or Evan and Maynard having a spontaneous swordfight).

Also, the story is too slow-paced and repetitive. The joke about Evan eating the bagel goes on for far too long, not to mentioned repeated scenes of everybody and his brother and sister telling Evan about his being too skinny. (Yo, some people are naturally very skinny-ever heard of Twiggy?)

It should be also noted that the author had been consistent in updating the strips over the first several years, but his output severely slackened in the last several. He did tell us that he had injuries and other health problems at the time; still it seems odd that he didn't just declare a hiatus so he could recover; he already had gained a devoted audience by that time.

++ Author biography

The author doesn't even name himself. All we know is that the author has travelled to Ireland, does running and other sports, attends furry conventions, and has done himself some serious injuries. (Presumably why the comic has stopped.)

++ Conclusion

As the author admits, //The End Of Things// originated as a college gag strip, and later he would use his characters and story in a webcomic. So how does it work as mass audience entertainment?

Well, for those who have lived at college, there are some laughs, limited by the fact that all the main characters are taking artistic-related majors. (I cannot help but think of an old //Non Sequitur// cartoon where a professor smiles as he writes out his final exam question: "What sort of job do you expect to get with a philosophy degree?".) And truth be told, it doesn't say very much about college itself. Yes, there are assignments and worries about grades, but we never find out about sports or other college activities.

Unrealism and mediocrity sinks what could have been a decent webcomic about college.