User:ZenForce

Just a comic enthusiast that also writes fiction when my brain is not a chaos of ideas, which is really strange that not happen.

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Rating Summary

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Background
To tell the truth, the first time i saw Pooky (the protagonist of the principal comic) it’s was a cameo in another webcomic (Latchkey Kingdom, to be specific) and some art of the same author. I liked so much her design and attitude, but at first I tough it was commission character, as the author usually put them like background characters. Big it’s my surprise that in the description of one the commissions describes that the character comes from other webcomic.

I, enthusiastic that I can saw the character in action, put the name of the comic in the list of “Have to read”. When comes the time that finally I can read it, I enter the website, and I was received with this. “Well, May the art is bad, but maybe the story is entertaining, like One Punch Man. Besides, I don’t think that can be too much worse than this” I thinked that moment. How wrong I was. I readied the entire archive, and the prequel archive, and I saw that not only the art is bad, but that the story has lost of holes and pointless characters. It was hard, especially since the website is not mobile friendly, but ended the two whole archives, and leaves me dissatisfied with both finals. So now we have this review, almost a year after that.

Downfall
From the artistic part, since day 1, and going down every day that the comic updates, somehow. From the story, can’t point a specific point, it’s too cloudy to see it.

Story and Plot
Antibunny: Our protagonist is, as before mentioned, Pooki, a bipedal talking bunny that is reporter and a witch, I guess, I can’t tell exactly because it acts more like the paranormal detective that almost every North American noir located story has of protagonist.

Nailbat: This is a prequel of the events of the previous comic, starred by one the side characters, Nailbat, a mix of Batman and Daredevil, and how the hero born, battle, found love and ascended to legendary. But I have to say that the things what happen here don’t affect the Nailbat of the principal story, I will extend in the writing section about this.

Both comics have the same theme circulating around them: segregation. Look, the background about the bipedal bunnies is that they was used for experimation for a X laboratory, and consequently of whatever do to them, they not only they are erect, but also have magic powers and have the capacity to see thephantom world. Even they have some type of religion built around the escape. Most of humans don’t know about this (or choose to ignore it) and they treat them like animal, in consequence they have the ideology that they are superior to them. I’m not a sociologist for judge the actions here, but I what I can say is I believe that the story is a little too… How to say it… Exaggerated till the point of begin edgy.

Art review
Critique the artist's ability to convey their message and style artistically. Does the artist have a style? Is it worth two shits? Can the guy make his characters look unique from one another? If he can't, fuck his comic up. Rip it the fuck apart. Treat it like you would treat a man that's just shit himself.

Writing review
Make a clear, concise review of writing here. Detail all the important things about the artist's writing abilities, or the writer's as the case may be. Do the characters act realistic? Does each have a distinct personality? Think about it this way: Even bad movies have decent characters. Even in the dungheap anime "Inuyasha", Kagome acts like a fourteen-year old girl, Inuyasha acts like a man-child, Miroku is a serious if horny monk, etcetera. They act like real people. So, does your webcomic artist have realistic characters? Do they act differently from one another?

Also talk about storyline. Is it cliched to all unholy fuck? Have you read anything like it, or seen anything like it in the movies? Is it ripped directly from Harry Potter? Does it make any sense? Finally, does the writer leave any loose threads in his story? Rip these comics apart if they commit any of these sins. Ripoff artists are not artists, they are literary slime.

Author biography
Nothing fancy, just a quick bio. Make fun of them if you want to. List every juicy detail you can find on their being an obnoxious prick if you feel like it, or just roughly tell us what they're like.

Conclusion
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Links
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