User:Wallcreeper

alt account for Mr Jaybird

WARNING: The entire review is (obviously) under construction. You gotta wait for a couple of days minimum and three for MAX. This shit is Burning me out. It is going to more than I originally expected.

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Rating Summary

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Background
While reading the Wiki's reviews, my mind remembered a webcomic that I stumbled upon years ago. I was certain that someone on the Wiki's forums brought it up, asked Webkilla for his blessing, received it and went on to craft a well deserved review for this wreck of a webcomic. So, I typed the Wiki's search... '''Nothing. Not a single review nor mention.'''

"No way! This webcomic has been around for nearly a decade and a half and it didn't have any major improvements implemented ever since its creation. It meets the criteria of a bad webcomic. Why isn't there a review in this domain already?"

After this confusion-filled monologue, I started digging on the forums and I, eventually, found something. The comic was nailed down in the forums' most wanted list in 2017. However, for reasons that have now been lost to the Shores of Time, not a single minute of effort was put into a review.

So, here I am, doing something that had to be done years, and oh boy, let me tell you...

I would rather play War Thunder, a game notorious for its Nerve-Wrecking, Soul-Breaking grinding than read a single page of this comic.

Downfall
Some say that it always sucked, while some other say that its downfall started at around pages 150~200.

One fact is true though: It sucks, and painfully so.

Story and Plot
In Fawnamere City, a CUNT by the name of Chrissy McCloud (how original), moves there to study Graphic design. From there on out, the story becomes a massive, convoluted mess full of ninjas, very stereotypical anime and college shit in which it can be refined into a fine glass of enraging wine. Mid-way, the comic drops its previous genres of action Adventure and shit for relationship talk. Oh and lots of sex talk.

Lots and lots and FUCKING LOTS of sex talk and fanservice.

I REALLY don't feel like summarising or telling the story, because it is such a convoluted mess that it cannot be explained. At all. I will explain later as to why it is such a mess, in the writing section.

Art review
Your typical, run of the mill, Katbox-standard art expectations, this time, with Animu season in it.

The early art is meh at best and not good at worst, with backgrounds being Real life images that slowly shifted away to meh backgrounds, with some bearing traces of copypasting. However, the character art had some sort of "Uniqueness" compared to the sea of Badonkers that Katbox was. The art improved at around pages 150-200. After that point though, very little changed.

Recent art is very Chalo-like (Guess what that also means...), with heavy does of animu in it. Anatomy is somewhat all over the place, with an extreme case of sameface syndrome.

That is not the worst part of the comic though. That title belongs to the writing.

Oh dear God... (If you think that I am missing something, point it out.)

Writing review
(Under construction, please wait.)

Author biography
There isn't a lot talk about MasterGodai aside from the fact that (if you haven't noticed already) he is a big weeb and he has four dead webcomics 6 feet under his backyard. Those being: Knuckle Up, Chitsu Anddo Asu, Rascals Goyoku, and Project Zero, all of which stopped updating years ago. You also can't read any of these, since Katbox died. Three of the four comics were also hosted on a site called Petite Symphony, which is now dead but the domain is still there and on whatever comic you click on, there is a 50/50 chance of being directed to the comic's site (Which hasn't been updated for God knows how long) or you get directed to the comic's position in the site but doesn't show ANY of the strips.

It is quite surprising that Godai didn't even put some sort of effort in reviving any of that shit.

Noteworthy info about him: He watched WebcomicRelief's review on his webcomic... And did not take it seriously...

Although he did admit that the early page where shit and/or cringe. But the guy downplayed the magnitude of how SHITTY his webcomic is.

Also, the founders of the site Petite Symphony created a new hosting site called Comics Break... Which is also dead.